Updates on the Identity
So I've been messing with the identity a bit. Sara said that the bars and the swirl were a bit much and contradicting themselves...so I thought I'd try some versions without it (you know...to please her). haha! But I think I agree. What do you think? I think I also like the contrast better on the back with it being blue instead of pink. If you can't remember the old card just scroll down a bit or click here. ;) I of course took the bar off the bottom of the envelope too.
Back option #1 (do you like the blue better than the pink on the original card?):
Back option #2 (does the pink dot make it look cheap?):
Front option #1 (does the copy look okay on the left?):
Front option #2 (do I need the logo on both sides?):
posted by jnc001 @ 9:43 PM
1 Comments:
i like this card much better than your previous (although i thought it was really good until these!)
I don't think the pink dot makes it look cheap, but i think the plain white print just looks cleaner and more professional. i also don't think you need the logo on both sides, so i prefer the information without the logo - and i think it looks good on the left side.
of course i'm not a design student, but i just thought i'd leave you some feedback from a semi-layout student. haha. ad/pr teaches us a little bit.
great job jess! =]
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